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Fucking Pissed
The emotion I display

Let us be,
Let us love,
Let us be what we are meant to be.

Keep to your business,
And I’ll keep to mine,
You don’t need to protect me
I know what I’m doing this time.

You all need to back off,
And let our love be just that,

Love

You try to complex it,
And make it a big deal
I wont let you take it away
This is something you can’t steal.

Young love
Never last

Well this time your wrong,
Why ruin something someone else has
Because you can’t find it,
This something is too strong.

To all you who fuck with love,
I got one thing to say with you.

Fuck you

Destroying something beautiful must be a game
Something fun,
Some kind of sport
Hunting it down with absolutely no shame.

This you can’t touch
This love I embrace,
No gun or knife can pierce through this heart,

These hearts
©2006-2009 ~Corkyway2smart
:iconcorkyway2smart:

Author's Comments

A lot of emotion in this one.

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:iconlostinherlove:
WOW Courtney that is kickass, I love you soo much, thank you for speaking out. And I agree FUCK ALL U FUCKERS lol. I really think you should get into writing more you are really really good. :blowkiss: Luv Ya :blowkiss:
:iconcorkyway2smart:
i can only wriite when there is emotion behind it. When sumthing is going on. ya kno.

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:blowkiss: Love You :blowkiss:
:iconlostinherlove:
yea I gotcha, that's cool, but I am very impressed with your writing hun it seriously kicks ass. LUV YA
:iconcorkyway2smart:
well, thank you babes. It def says wat i was feeling last night.

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:blowkiss: Love You :blowkiss:
:iconjesslynne:
wow.. awesome piece, wicked passionate.. and my whole relationship thing kinda wound up like this.. cept the fuckers won.. so dont let it happen in your situation...

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if everyone told the truth
even when it hurts
the world would be a better place
:iconcorkyway2smart:
Oh, dont worry Jess. I wont let the fuckers win! hehe are u callin ur rents fuckers? hmmm...

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:blowkiss: Love You :blowkiss:
:iconjesslynne:
well since theyre parents arent they fuckers? arent all parents fuckers? LOL

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if everyone told the truth
even when it hurts
the world would be a better place
:iconjman9083:
Hmm interesting convorsation here, good poem, lots of emotion, good rhyme scheme, i like the structure with the little piece then the next stanza explaining it
:iconzairynne:
very well put i to me it seem that ur talking about parents at first then other people who take love to lightly like the stupid kids at my school who say that they love each other the first day they go out then they only go out for about a week and end up hating each other ... any way thats what i got from it all in all i enjoyed it :D :thumbsup:

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:bomb: war does not determine who's right it determines who's left :ambulance:

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